Video evaluation remastered

I think my video went poorly on my behalf, I feel I should have thought of a far more interesting story and developed it further, this was a childish idea. But on the other hand my crew worked very hard on achieving my ideas and contributed some very good ideas of their own, the costumes fitted well, the dialogue I was pleased with (Apart from my own) but, I think if I thought this out a little more and had more time to edit the story in the video could of have made far more sense. Which lets it down hugely and it had very awful flaws because of this, and I feel like, in this aspect of it, I've not only let myself down but my crew also, I have not done them justice and I should have worked harder on it. I should have used my time better and done a very strict time script and done it through one take, I would have achieved a much better result and a much sleeker and more professional finish. But again, I'm pleased with the song I have, it fits well with my little montage, but again, the montage was pretty pointless too, I didn't have the video I needed to finish it as I desperately needed to edit otherwise I would have been far worse off, but if I had the time I would improve it with more video, more story with better editing and dialogue, it wasn’t very informative. I should have used varied camera angles to convey more emotion and make it more exciting to watch, but not too many otherwise it would have spoiled it. I feel that my editing skills were shabby, I have just used a little text and graphics to fill in the blanks I have, which is very disappointing and probably an appalling way of trying to cover things up. Again this is another major flaw in my film and I think I should have worked much harder to fix that. But I did manage to use all the film needed to make a vague story line and it does seem to link up partially. I personally feel that if I was to put this on any website people wouldn’t understand what I was trying to portray and I now know that in the future I need to plan better and put far more effort into my filming to gain the perfection I'm looking for, or perhaps even get close to what I want. So in conclusion, I'm incredibly pleased with how well my crew worked with me and each other as a team, but I feel like I have let them down with my poor editing skills and directing expertise, so I must work on these things to make sure they aren't made fools of by me.