Poem evaluation remastered

My poem and sounds didn't go quite to plan as I couldn't retrieve or re-create the sounds I wanted to have orignally, but I made do with the resources I had and made something that could subsitute what I had planned. I tried to make the sounds relate to the words and interpreted them in my own way, but it didn't go to plan as it was very hard to find that perfect sound.. I made it in adobe premier elements, I faded, over lapped, cut and removed sounds to create a barely adeqate post. I think most of the sounds worked apart from the singing, so overall I'm not impressed with the result. In conclusion I feel that again, I lacked the effort and drive to create something worth while, I should have spent more time on the sounds to get the perfection I was striving for.