Lip sync review remastered

Well, first of all the review of my video personally, I dislike this video because I hate how the mouth works, it doesn't look like it's talking what so ever. If I had time to re do this project I wouldn't make the head move as it does, I don't like how the smaller snake in the corner is disintegrating, another thing I would change. I also don't like how I made the snakes look, the colour scheme doesn't work with the nature of snakes, the personality doesn't match the colours, or the back ground, overall it just doesn't work. I made it far too cartoon like, because the snakes are blue and yellow, which are not natural colours, I feel like I didn't put as much effort as I should have or done before and I would definitely work on this to create better videos in the future. Becuase effort is one thing I majorly lack when I'm under a time limit as I rush to finish it in time. But I think how I made the video was perhaps effective, I was efficient with how I worked off my exposure sheet, quickly making progress and finishing a single sheet with precision, but also getting it done quickly. But I had to make it lean on a rock made of felt because it kept tipping and falling over as I tried to make it talk, but I propped it up and hid the tilt with felt and made it look like it was in the habit which was being portrayed by the image in the back ground.